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Hello, haven't wrote a journal in a while, but then again, I mostly use the journal to write about something, despite me having much followers. But I digress. I would've wrote this journal earlier, but unfortunately during Easter, me and my cousin were unfortunately kidnapped again and hung over a bonfire with chocolate bunnies chanting around us. Yes, we were outsmarted by chocolate bunnies, EVIL chocolate bunnies. Unfortunately, we did not survive. But! We got better.

Anyways, the real reason why I am writing this journal is like the title says above. *points to title*

If you don't know, Ship Sinking is a fan term from Tv Tropes meaning that any hope of shipping any particular characters are gone. Like for example, say Bob has a huge crush on Aerith (Aerith and Bob is another Tv Trope, but none of that now) who is oblivious to his advancements. Even so, fans will often ship them together in fan made stories or drawings. That would be the birth of a shipping called BobxAerith. I am sure you know what "Y" x "Z" is, so I won't bother to go into that. Continuing, through the story, Bob will try his hardest to win her affection. But wait, after the end of the story, he learns something troubling. She's a ninja pirate zombie from the future that came from the past! So after all his hard attempts, he may learn that they can never be together because there is something she must do and travels to the future to change the past. Bob may then fall into a Heroic BSOD (Another TV Trope) and may even die later on. That! is an example of Ship Sinking. So now that you know it in a coconutshell, let us go the main points of the journal.

Now let us start with a major one from the Zelda Universe.

Now I know many people around this world prefer the original LinkxZelda pairings even after 25 or so years. But let's take a closer look into the history of the timeline. In Ocarina of Time, Link goes through two phases starting with his child and adult. It is said that after he defeated Ganondorf, Zelda sent him back through time to relive his childhood. But! Doing so cause a split in the timeline, his child timeline and his adult timeline. Kind of confused? So am I! Anyways, Word of God (Another Trope) says that Twilight Princess originates from Ocarina of Time's Child Timeline, while the Windwaker originates from the Adult Timeline. Here's where the sinking comes in.

In both games, it is said that the two Zelda's are direct descendants of the Ocarina of Time Zelda. In Windwaker, it is said that once Ganondorf was defeated, Link disappeared and never returned, even after Ganondorf broke free of the Sacred Realm, he did not return. Then came the last resort to call upon the gods to flood all of Hyrule, which was granted and gave us the start of the Windwaker. In Twilight Princess, although it may not have been said, but hardcore Zelda players may know that even after returning to relive his childhood, Link left on a journey to find a "very special friend" who was never revealed in Majora's Mask; many claimed he was looking for Saria, but it was then confirmed that the "very special friend" was Navi. Who knows where the hell the annoying blob of light went and how it was apparently special enough for Link to leave Hyrule. See where I'm going with this?

With WW Zelda and TP Zelda being direct descendants of OoT Zelda, with both OoT Link's gone from Hyrule, it means...wait for it, that whoever Zelda married in BOTH timelines, it wasn't Link. Make of that of what you will.

There's also a minor one for LinkxMidna. Everyone can see that Midna sunk the ship when she shattered the Twilight Mirror now preventing both her and Link from seeing each other. Also on a funny note, Link barely knew the Zelda in Twilight Princess, just that she was the Princess of Hyrule who had to make a Sadistic Choice (Trope) of fighting and possibly be killed with Hyrule next, or surrendering where even her people doesn't know of what the hell is going on. There's a funny joke going around about that.

(SPOILERS!)

Ganondorf while possessing Zelda: Well Link! Your descendants may have defeated me in the past, but can you fight the woman you love?
Link: Um...actually. I barely know Zelda.
Ganondorf: What?
Link: I was already given a love interest, two if you count Midna. Zelda? I don't even know her.
Ganodorf: Fu...

Here's another major ship sinking from the Soul Calibur Universe.

Ever since the game started, many have shipped SophitiaxSeigfried (Or SophitiaxTaki if your into yuri) so how did the producers decideded to sink the ship? They married her off to some blacksmith named Rothion (Which was also a love at first sight) and having two children with him. Many fans were not pleased.

They done this again in Soul Calibur V.

Ever since Kilik and Xianghua appeared in the games; which I am to believe at the second game of the series, many have started to ship them. Throughout the rest of the series, the shipping continued until Soul Calibur V was announced and Lexia came in. Many quickly assumed that Kilik was the father, with her having his necklace. So how did the ship sink? If you guessed she got onto a cannon and was quickly fired into another ship causing it to sink, your wrong! They pulled off another Rothion and she was married to some Chinese General and having two children with him. Again fans were not pleased.

Despite these, people still try to make up many interesting ways for them to die so they can continue the shipping. This is another Trope called "Die for our Shipping" which is exactly as it says on the Tin.

But here's some hope for KilikxXianghua with the inclusion of Xiba. His profile says that Xiba is the estranged son of Kilik and Xianghua so it may be confirmed that the two had that one night and when Xianghua gave birth to him, she apparently ditched him in the mountains for unknown reasons.

While that is hope for KilkxXianghua shippers, it also brings another deal to the XibaxLexia shippers. Meaning if Xiba truly is the estrange son of the two, then that would make him and Lexia half-brother and half-sister. While I know there is some people who have the strange fetish of half-sibling romance, it may not have sinked the ship but fueled the flames.

Also with Soul Calibur IV, many began to ship SeigfriedxHilde and there may be any or none hopes for the shipping to continue with Hilde becoming a mother of two children. (Wow, the producers of Soul Calibur must like their twos) It was never revealed who the father is, due to time restraints for them to finish Soul Calibur V. (That's right, it was confirmed that the story was supposed to be at least Four Times as long with Viola being a major part of it and Ezio actually having a story within there. However, they did not want to delay the game any longer and ended up sending it like it was.) This may either sink the ship or fuel the flames as rumours are saying that whoever is the father of her children, it is not Seigfried. But with her traveling and living with him in his brigade of mercenaries, the rumor may be false. There may be hope for the shipping yet.

Away from video games, let's go to TV Shows...

This is also going to contain spoilers for said shows.

In Stargate Atlantis (It's a great show, so I recommend watching it if your into Sci-Fi) there has been many shippers for the main characters John Sheppard and Elizabeth Weir. But that ship sank when Elizabeth was greatly injured and can only be revived by doing a risky chance of healing her by reviving the nanites within her body (It's complicated on how said tiny machines got into her so watch it) and it healed her, but also turned her into part of the enemy. They were also in danger of being washed out into space, so they were desperate. Now that ship sunk when Elizabeth did another risky gamble of getting her team out by staying behind and Hoist her captives by their own Petard. It literally is a Mind Rape of what the Replicators actual potential is. I'll list a small example of their potential. Being created by tiny machines, they can heal their wounds, and are practically Immune to Bullets. They can also stick their hand into your forehead and play a scenario for you, which makes it litterally a Mind Rape.

Anyways, another shipping was John Sheppard (Again) and Teyla Emmanigan, along with Ronon Dex and Teyla again. John and Teyla even kissed, but it was more of a Take That Kiss then an emotional one because John was being controlled. It sunk later on when Teyla revealed that she was pregnant. Both men were suprised with John suspiciously looking at Ronon, who defended saying that it wasn't him. The father of her child is a side character who suprisingly played a major role before being Demoted to Extra during the events.

Now let's move on to another minor example in the Tv Show Heroes. (I also recommend this show if your into people having powers, but be warned that it is a Anyone Can Die Show. Many fans are not pleased that their favorites Heroes were killed in it.)

Claire Bennet and Peter Petrelli was suprisingly good shipping bait for shippers. But it sunk deeply when it was revealed that Claire is the daughter of Nathan Petrelli, Peter's brother. Making them Uncle and Niece. Shippers were displeased.

Now enough major examples, let's move on to a few minor ones.

In Super Smash Brothers Brawl, there is one Mission Event called Unwanted Suitors which had Samus and Zelda face off against Captain Falcon and Luigi. As it says on The Tin, It appears that the two girls don't want the two men. FalconxSamus was suprisingly popular when Samus was revealed to be a girl. LuigixZelda? Not sure if there are any shippers for this one.

Kingdom Hearts was another game which had a lot of sinking ships, but I will only reveal one, even though I am against yaoi. SaixxXehanort (Isn't that a lovely play of X's?) was popular in II because Saix was buttering up to Xehanort and became his Second in Command. Saix also thinks highly of Xehanort and many yaoi fangirls were overjoyed.

How did the Ship Sank? In the Midquel; 356/2 Days, it was revealed that Saix was planning on overthrowing Xehanort and just got close to him so he can give a suprise attack. Fangirls were displeased.

In fact, there are many shippings within the Organization XIII, but the ship sank deeply once you think that the Organization are Nobodies, having no hearts, meaning they can't actually love.

There's also a minor one in Final Fantasy XIII. When it was announced and characters were revealed, many shippers immediately shipped SnowxLightning, but when it was released, it sunk badly because it was revealed that Snow is engaged to her sister; Serah and that Lightning really hates him. So the ship sunk before it even left the dock.


I think that is enough for now and I will continue those Writing Tips eventually. I suffer from procasination, laziness, and no inspiration, so...ha!
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My mood is Joy? Puppies are going to die...

So this month we have to suit up and enchance the security of our households as a certain fat man in a red suit will come along soon. He'll marched into our households and steal our cookies. Why, I remember last year, he came into my house and stole my cookies. I was prepared for him as I shot in straight in the head with a shotgun...he got better. This year, I'm preparing a trapdoor leading to a moat of piranha's, as well as heat seeking missles. May install laser guided shotguns as well.

Anyways, that's all I have to say for now. So let me conclude this with 10 random facts concerning animals and plants.

Fact 10: Lady is trying to kill you
You know that dog on Lady and the Tramp? Apparently, those type of dogs usually go through some part in their lives where they'll attack anything that moves for no reason. So don't be suprised that you go home and find that your cat, bird, panther, pet bear, and your cougar are dead with said dog in the middle of them and still intent on killing you.

Fact 9: Bunnies are evil
Those that knows me enough will notice that me and my cousin has some feud with man-eating rabbits. It started in easter when chocolate bunnies kidnapped us and held us on a stick over a campfire with them chanting around us.

Anyways, back to the sanity side, rabbits feet aren't big for a reason. It helps them hop far, invented the bunny hop which eventually leads to space, and for breaking your spine. Yeah, bunny kicks has a potential to break your spine if kicked at the right spot. Their bites aren't anything special as well. Also, watch if they charge at you. Their headbutts hurt too.

Fact 8: Cats can be as dangerous as dogs
Cat lovers will be pointing out that cats are more neater then dogs and mainly kept as household pets. But they can be just as vicious. Cats on a bad day will want a lot of room, even somehow expanding their body mass so you can't sit on your living room couch without it hissing at you. Anyways, when their in a bad mood, it's best to keep away since their bites are as infecting as dog bites, albeit a bit more dangerous. Unlike dogs, cats teeth are designed to pierce through flesh, which is opposite of a dogs teeth which is designed to crush bones. The treatment isn't any off the wall medicine either. They're expensive. Lastly, they're the only members of the cat family who hunts for fun. So if your unaware, they may make you trip down the stairs when they pounce on your leg.

Fact 7: Tits (No, not what you think)
Tits are those small birds you see flying around, usually in winter. Now you may wonder how exactly this small package of fluffliness is dangerous. Well, they may not be dangerous to humans, but bats sure suffer from them. In winter, bats hibernate. In winter, these birds fly around looking for food. Then if the bird finds the bat, it'll proceed to bite their heads off and eat them.

Fact 6: Give uncle Anteater a hug!
You may wonder how dangerous an Anteater is, despite having no teeth. But remember, they have very long claws. also, anteaters were known to take down predators by one handy technique. That technique is a hug. No, seriously. If you see an anteater and it stands on two legs and spreads its arms, it wants to hug you. Of course, with long claws, put two and two together and presto, death by hugs. So run away if it wants to hug you.

Fact 5: How do moles reproduce?
Moles are pretty stubborn. While a little blind, they will not hesitate to attack anything that moves. Incidently, they are also cannibals. So if you put two moles together, expect to see one fat mole later on.

Fact 4: Octopusses
Octopusses are pretty small and they can slip through almost any cracks. So one time, some marine biologists decided to put one of their giant Octopusses in a tank full of sharks for a night, they were NOT expecting to find some sharks missing and some dead the next day.

Fact 3: Panda's are NOT cute.
Holds the record of being the slowest, carefree bears in the bear family. While only eating bamboo gives these guys the impression that they're herbivores, give these guys a chance and they'll eat any kind of meat. They have a carnivorous digest system, so they can eat you. They mostly eat bamboo because it's the only thing that can't outrun them.

Fact 2: Chimpanzee's are evil as well
While smarter and the more humanoid animal in history, these guys give the impression that they are playful and mischievous. In fact, they are more dangerous then the harmless gorilla. How? They have a history of eating meat, which includes humans. They also commit caniballism when starving. Putting two hungry chimpanzee's together and you'll get one fat chimpanzee as well. They are also known for kidnapping human babies and eating them.

Fact 1: The tree that could enslave humankind if given the chance.
The Sandbox Tree. In my eyes, this is the most dangerous thing in our planet. These trees are large, the thorns that grow on its bark is large, its sap is corrosive (meaning it can melt human skin) AND poisonous. The fruit they grow are large. When they fall, they'll explode on impact. It's also known to fling seeds up to 100ft which also explodes on impact. Meaning it has a 100ft radius of STAY OFF MY F*UCKIN PROPERTY. If these trees could walk, it could enslave mankind!

These are only a little bit of harmless looking things that are really dangerous. It also includes the very spacious Hippo which can bite a full grown Nile Crocodile in half if its baby is in danger. Also the elegant, graceful swan which can and will break your arm or neck with its muscular wings if you go near its eggs. And what about dolphins, the films show they are harmless and playful, but in reality stay away from them during marroon season. (That is the mating season for fishlife, right?) They have a history of raping female dolphins and pretty much anything that moves. And don't get me started with Squirrels!
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Time Cycles.

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So, here I am again, still focusing on the "How to make a story". Deciding on to reveal one of my favorite things, I decided to make a journal about it. Time Cycles, as suggested in the title. I love Time Cycles, I love how no matter what you do, it'll always lead in a Cycle. I'll show a few examples.

1: Knight of Cornelia

I am Garland.
I am a Knight of Cornelia.
Loyal I was to my Queen.
However, I soon became rogue for an unknown reason.
I kidnapped the Princess and by instinct, I went to the Chaos Shrine nearby.
I stood on the altar, wondering why I decided to go rouge.
Before I could ponder further about it, four nameless warriors came to me.
We fought and eventually, I die.
However, I was revived not in the present, but the past.
My revivors were four fiends, able to control the elements of this world.
It seems I made a deal with them earlier.
In the past, I would send them to the future.
Where in turn they'll send me back in the past at the time of my death.
With that said, I remembered everything.
I would die in the past, but be reborn in the future.
In the future, I would turn rouge at some point and cause the four nameless warriors to kill me.
Then the four fiends I sent to that time would send me back in the past.
Then the four past fiends would revive me, telling me that they were waiting.
I then would gain more knowledge and strength for every time I'm sent in the past.
So there they go. I opened a space-time rift, transporting them to my original time.
Now alone, I would wait my remaining years until my time has come.
Now old, now alone, I would lay on the altar and die a peaceful, lonely death.
To make this cycle infinite, my memories would be erased.
Now dead, now alone, I lay to rest on the altar.
But I will be reborn in the future.
I am Garland.
I am a Knight of Cornelia.
...
...

One cycle there. Now one way to prevent the cycle is for the four nameless warriors to go back to the past, destroy the fiends there and defeat Garland again.

2. Not so Original Book

I am a man, dedicated to being a scientist.
However, I was also a crazy one.
No one would help me due to my reputation.
I then dedicated myself to build a time machine.
However, there was no way I could.
Not without proper instructions.
Just then, out of the bushes came a mysterious man who gave me an old worn-out book.
Before asking what it was, he mysteriously vanished.
Looking at the book, I discovered that it was on how to build a time machine.
But it was so worn out, there was no way I could read it.
So, using technology, I made a pure copy of the book. Just like new.
So, I dedicated my life in building it.
It took me thirty years, but I finally finished it.
Remembering that mysterious man from thirty years ago, I grabbed the now worn out book and transported to the past.
Remaining hidden in the bushes, I waited for him.
And waited...and waited.
Noticing he's not coming, I walked out of the bushes and approached my younger self and handed him the book.
The energy from the machine worn out and I vanished, going back to my own time.
Then I saw that I was the mysterious man. I pondered day and night on how long the cycle has been going.
I then dedicated the remaining of my life trying to figure it out.

Second Cycle. As you can see, there is no true source of the book. The book is subjected to disposal, but revived as another book.

3. It's like a dream.

It's all like a dream.
I would fall asleep in that church, with the couple about to get married with the brides sister watching.
Just then, I jolted awake by the sudden appearance of SWAT Officers, gunning down the couple.
The bride would survive, and accidently murder her sister, where then she'll lose her memories.
I then would find her in the back, confused, and hurt.
I offered to take her under my wing.
Just then, strange monsters appeared, all twisted and deadly.
However, the bride would not panic, she'll simply activate a strange power called Overdive.
Diving into individuals, offering her strength.
That triggered another memory inside of me.
I am a High One. A monster taking appearance of a human.
I would not be alone, there would be other High Ones.
A downfall to one of us would only make the monsters stronger.
This girl would defeat both the High Ones and the Monsters, saving mankind.
I would be the last to fall.
On my last brim of life, she would aim the gun at me and pull the trigger.
The fall of both the High Ones and the Monsters would trigger a disturbance in the space-time rift.
Being the last one alive, I would witness this. As the bullet neared me, the rift would take me back.
I'd wake up again in that church, in the very same position as the SWAT Officers would come and gun them down.
I'd again would find her in the back, taking her under my wing.
I've no memories for the transportation would overwrite my memories.
The cycle would continue, when the monsters would again appear.
It will repeat itself, concluding with me waking up in the same church.

This cycle seems like an endless dream, waking up after dying, only to observe history repeating itself.

4. Never Ending Fantasy

Cosmos. Goddess of Harmony.
Chaos. God of Discord.
Two gods, trapped in an endless battle.
Both gods would summon warriors from other realms.
Where they would fight until one falls.
Once one side is victorious, a divine energy; called Shinryu, would come and purify them.
It would send the fallen warriors to where they were.
Only the winners of the previous war would have memories of this.
Once Chaos or Cosmos reawakens with restored powers, they would again summon the same warriors.
They have no memories for the purification would also delete their memories of that time.
They would battle again, until one side is victorious.
No matter who wins, they would again lose their memories after their downfall.
Even Cosmos and Chaos would be purified with their memories gone as well.
No matter who wins, they still lose.

Kind of not so confusing.


That's all my tired mind could think up of at the moment. Hope you enjoyed it.

:penguin: <-- I'm awesome!
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Ten Generation V Pokemon worth mentioning


Please note that I'm not considering these the top ten Pokemon and that it is only my opinion.


Alright, had Pokemon Black for about two months already; started on Summer, now I'm on Winter, about to go on Spring. So I figured I should put in the ten Pokemon I consider worth mentioning. So here goes.


1: Serperior - The Regal Pokemon and the final form of Grass Starter Pokemon Snivy. With its name a combination of Serpent and Superior combined, I fell in love; not litteraly, with this Pokemon. I guess Emboar could fit his way here, but I've had enough of Fire/Fighting Pokemon for now. I started off with Snivy and the Pokemon has helped me through countless challenges. Also worth noting that it is the longest Starter Pokemon in existence for now.


2: Gothitelle - Back in Gen. III, Gardevoir was one of my mains; alongside Blaziken. In Gen. IV, they included her in again and I added Lucario to my mains. Now in Gen. V, being entirely new Pokemon until the game is finished, I've had no ways of getting my Gardevoir in. That is until I met Gothitelle. Gardevoir will still be my favorite, but Gothitelle is just as good. She, too has helped me through countless challenges. It's worth noting that her name in French is Sinderella.


3: Zoroark - An illusion Pokemon. This seems to be one of the more useful Pokemon to use, due to his ability. I recieved my with a Crowned Beast; Suicune. I had two Suicunes, one Entei and Raikou. I recieved the three in a giveaway, and recieved another Suicune in a Wifi Download. What I did with this Pokemon was, I had a Fighter Pokemon in the back row, meaning that Zoroark appeared on the field as the figher pokemon. Since AI's are usually stupid at the beginning of games, they spammed Psychic Moves, trying to land a hit. Dark Types are immune to Psychic Types, but could lose its immunity with Miracle Eye or the Target item.


4: Volcarona - An unique type combination of Fire and Bug. Its name is also a combination of Volcano and Corona. Of course, the only way to recieve this in-game is after completing the game, where it get an egg; Larvesta from a Ranger. One is also found in the maze at the Relic Castle. This Pokemon helped me with the extra challenges and one of my current mains.


5: Scolipede - The cool Bug of this Generation. Due to the difficulties of getting Skorupi, which evolves into Drapion in Gen. IV, I couldn't main it, but this pokemon has become available as Venipede and Whirlipede early in the game, allowing me to capture it and main it. Its roar is also fantastic.


6: Chandelure - An unique combination of Ghost and Fire. Due to the liking of eery things, i've easily become fascinated to this pokemon. I trained it as Litwick and evolved in and continued to train it to learn Overheat, in which I used my one and only Dusk Stone to evolve it. its sacrifce of Destiny Bond has helped me through hard battles, especially Ghetis and his Hydreigon. This Pokemon will always be remembered.


7: Hydregion - If two heads are better than one, how about three? That's right, the psuendo-legendary Pokemon of this Generation. Of course, due to its only availability as Deino in Victory Road, evolving at 50, then again at 64, I only managed to train this fierce Pokemon after I completed the game. It's roar of impending doom is further enchanced when it uses Hyper Voice; showing it doesn't take crap from anybody.


8: Braviary/Mandibuzz - The eagle and vulture Pokemon. Eagles are probably my favorite birds on our planet. When I first heard of Braviary, I immediately wanted to capture it and main it. However, since I have Black, i had to settle with Mandibuzz. I think it is worth noting that they are complete opposites of each other, Braviary being an all male species and Mandibuzz being an all female species being one of the key points. After I first battled Cynthia and saw Braviary, I immediately went on Global Link and looked for one...of course, many of them asked for Level 1 Reshiram's and Zekrom's, it was difficult. So I did a sacrifice. I already transferred some of my Pokemon from Heartgold and Platinum, so I got my Level 100 Shiny Absol and offered it up for trade for Braviary. I got the bird the next day. Absol's sacrifice will not be in vain.


9: Alomomola - The beautiful water type of this Generation. Starting in Gen. III, I figured Milotic held the honor of beautiful water type. Gen. IV introduced Lumineon, who was just as beautiful. Now in Gen. V, we have Alomomola...kind of rolls off your tongue. Being an one stage only Pokemon, meaning it does not evolve nor does it evolve from anything else, it has pretty good stats. I captured it and bred it so it can learn Mirror Coat and that has helped me with several challenges.


10. Golurk - What makes this Pokemon awesome, I wonder? Could it be that it is an unique combination of Ghost and Ground? Could it be that its Attack greatly makes up for its low Speed? Maybe perhaps that it is a robot-like Pokemon. No that's not it, what makes this Pokemon awesome is that it could Fly! Seriously, what's better than a robot then a flying robot? This is my Pokemon that I use to fly me around Unova. This Pokemon is pretty awesome, it's like the Iron Giant or Iron Man. I loved the Iron Giant when I was a wee lad. This helped bring up some past memories...


Where's the Legendary Pokemon? Your probably wondering. Of course, the Legendary Pokemon are more awesome than some of the Pokemon listed on here, so I figured I should do the Top Three Legendary Pokemon worth mentioning. So here's the top Three worth mentioning.


1: Cobalion - The claimed to be Leader of the Musketeer Quartet. If I had to choose between all four of them, it would be this one. Virizion is closely fitting to this one. I like this Pokemon a lot. I'm planning on training this one to Level 100 after I evolve all my Pokemon and complete the Pokedex...of course without Victini, Thunderous, Landorus, Keldeo, Meloetta, and Genesect, it will never be complete.


2: Reshiram - The mascot of Pokemon Black and the Fiery White Yang Pokemon. Its roar is awesome, its angel-like appearance is awesome, its type Fire and Dragon is awesome, its roar in the cutscene is just beautiful. Its attacks Fusion Flare and Blue Flare are pretty awesome too, but Kyurem's; although with no way of learning it as of yet, Frozen Flare and Freeze Bolt are more awesome. Its background music when it awakens is beautiful as well, but it also plays for Zekrom in Pokemon White, but I feel the music suits Reshiram more.


3: Meloetta - This Pokemon is not as of yet, release by Nintendo. But when it's finally released, I'm sure to main it. It's Normal/Psychic combination is useful, as it is immune to Ghosts, which is what Psychics are weak against, but its other form is a Normal/Fighter combination. Another combination that will make its type weak against its own type. Fighting types do normal damage to its own and is strong against Steel; Cobalion, Rock; Terrakion, and Normal; Meloetta. Still, this Pokemon seems awesome and can't wait until it is released. So hurry up Nintendo.


And there we have it. Of course, this is only my opinion, yours will differ. So, there...


I've said all I wanted to say, so I don't have nothing else to say except LATER!!!



Lastly, I'm going to write another guide on how to create your stories. First guide introduced on spelling and such. Second guide was on OC and FC Creating. Now, it will be on Story Creating, so stay tuned!
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I feel this is long overdue. So, here's Part II of my Writing Guide. Here I'll explain OC creating. OC basically means Out Character, meaning he/she is a character of your creation. Some are good, while some are bad. Taking observation, most are bad.

Then there is FC's. Meaning Fan-Characters. These are semi Creations. Basically, this is a child or relative of a known character that was created by you, marking it's FAN Character. Cousins are usually met with negative criticisms, especially if it is the cousin of a chracter that is said to have no family, like...Link. Childrens of said characters are a mixture of positive and negative criticism. Depending on the parents, it may get good or bad remarks. Many fans of Zelink (Zelda and Link...seriously, think of something else, this got old since Ocarina of Time) will give positive remarks on their child. On the otherhand, a child born from...say Link and Cassandra (Soul Calibur) the Zelink fans will rave and rant about their child. While some fans (You know I'm talking about you. I see you reading this. Your eyebrows twitching.) will give positive remarks. Think of it like racism (I was seriously trying to avoid that word) Comments are depending on their origin. Like saying a fan of Zelink and also like Cassandra. He/She will immediately look in disgust at the child of Link and Cassandra and rant about how Link belongs to Zelda. Let me just say that Nintendo didn't have Link and Zelda fall in love, maybe some games I've forgotten, but I digress. They may have blushed at each other and such, but they never got together. The Link and Zelda pairing is as fan-based as Link and Cassandra. Usually I counter these remarks by pairing another character with Zelda.

*Flashback*

Someone: *Looks at picture of Link and Cassandra* What about Zelda?
Me: Toss Seigfried at her?
Someone: Yeah, she'll like that.

*End*

True Story.

Now then. Let me give you some tips in Character Creation.

First of all. Don't just simply toss in a character just for the hell of it...unless as the man to take the bullet. Make its origins.

Characters that are usually holding terrible power and can easily defeat heroes are looked down upon a lot. Create the character with flaws that can easily be noticable.

Characters that has the main purpose of having another character fall in love with right away are also looked down upon. Let's take a look at two characters I have created for a fiction.

Kalas and Innocent. Although not knowing it, they are twins that were split from the first five years of their lives. Due to their busy lives now, even at 18, they have forgotten the first five years of their life. They also gained possession of strange powers. Their main purpose are to bring out more of certain characters and accelerate the relationships of others.

Kalas has the ability Mediumship. He could see and talk to Ghosts, Spirits, Angels, etc...
Innocent has Telekinesis. Able to move objects with her mind.

Kalas, you'll probably think as ''Oh, just a kid who can see stuff''
While Innocent, "I bet the author is going to have her as all powerful. I'll read something else"

So, to prevent this. Show limits.

Kalas' ability is automatic. He has no limit on it and he can talk to ghosts whenever he wants. Fans will ignore this as the ability has no means of being used offensively.
Now Innocent, she could use her ability both Offensively and Defensively. When fans know her limits, they'll become interested. Innocent could lift stuff with her mind, but depending on the distance, duration, AND weight of the target, she'll tire out. Even holding up a pebble for ten seconds will give her a headache. Even having it for over a decade, she hasn't tried mastering it, instead she tried to get rid of it. Fans will become interested in characters abilities when they know the limits of the ability.


Now, for the personality. There are many combinations used for this. From the cold, silent, cool type to the cute, bubbly, retarded type. Create your own combination to avoid making a character clichè.

Kalas is often quiet, but he thinks a lot. When alone, he may talk to his ghosts a lot. He can also figure out a situation and avoid it if possible, but due to his short vocabulary, he may make the situation worst. A man of few words, and no interest in romantic relationships. He'll remark some people with sarcasm when needed and does what he is told if he wants or if it's in his reach. He's quite friendly, although his trust is hard to gain even harder to nigh impossible to REgain it. He often doubts if he should find peace or get revenge for his father figure who was killed by a spy. He knows justice and respects elders and stronger opponents. He doesn't fight a girl unless he has too. All in all, he's a man who is confused of his alliance.

Innocent, like her brother, is quiet and thinks a lot. Even alone, she doesn't speak much. She only speaks when spoken too and will get talkative when she's comfortable. She's too focused on her schooling to get involved in relationships, but she knows how to persuade males and occassionally females. She only uses her powers when prompted too, but mostly for a distraction. She doesn't try to get herself to be beautiful as she dislikes attention and huge crowds. She's not as Sarcastic as her brother, but when she makes a comment, it could strike a nerve or cause someone to break down. She's a young women who doesn't know what her tongue speaks and is only focused on her schoolwork and finding a way to get rid of her ability.


Now, their story. Make this as creative as you can as this is what will usually interest the readers. A character may be a twisted badass who everyone may hate at first glance, but if his story is full of pain and torture, the fans will feel a little sympathy for him. A character may be stupid and never really knows what he is doing. Fans will tease him, but if you show his story as a child who was dropped, then maybe they'll show little, if some sympathy for him.

Kalas and Innocent's parents were divorced when they were five. The mother taking Innocent, and the father taking the boy. The father, due to his gambling problems, owed dept to the mafia and fled their homeland of Ameria to Italy. Unfortunately, it wasn't long until his gambling problems caught up. Now he owed money to the don. One night, the don and his minions broke in their house and demanded the money, which the father had lost again. So, they looked for some other payment. Just then, one of the don's sons found the boy and took him as his own. They then burnt the house down and it is unknown if the father survived or not. Now as an adopted child of the don's son, he was looked down upon, but that son taught the boy everything, from fighting to cooking, to school work to house maintenance.  Now the spy has come in and killed everyone including the don's son as revenge. The boy survived along with the older son who quickly became don and banished the boy from the family. They continued to torment him and nearly killed him one night and left him to die. Then, he gained his ability in which he saw the ghost of his father figure who told him to keep moving. Heeding his wishes, the boy gained the strength to continue on his life, changing his name to Kalas Angelus. His real name is now only a faded memory in which only the older son knows. He moved to Japan to flee and attended a school called Yagami where he learned that the spy who killed his father figure also attended the school. Here, he began to question whether he should seek peace or revenge.

Now Innocent, unlike her brother, kept her name. After her mother split, she immediately began to see another guy who was apparently richer. So, she lived the life of luxury, only being tormented as being seen as a peasant then one with rich blood. Her step sisters also tormented her and forced her to watch one of their shows in which she didn't like. So wishing for the T.V. to blow up, her wish came true as her Telekinesis manifested and blew the T.V. up. Here she had fun with her ability for a while until she began to notice her limits. Her mother eventually became infected with an incurable disease and she died with only a last wish. She wished for Innocent to find her real family and gave her enough money to move away. She didn't like it here anyways, so she moved to Japan and attended to school in Yagami where she met Kalas. Now with Kalas changing his name as well as missing for 13 years or so, they both didn't recognize each other as family. She's only a young female who wants a friend she can console with, being in a childhood nightmare where no one paid attention to her.


Lastly, appearance. The appearance is also depended on the story of your character. Like say your character has an eyepatch or styles her hair to cover one eye. Let's say in her story, she was subjected to a nail to the eye where it had to be removed to prevent infection. There we see why the girl dresses like a pirate or a goth. Lonely males may also make their girls have overexaggerated bust and hip sizes, while crazy females may make their boys look pretty and Faaaabalous for their desire of yaoi...shudders. It be best to avoid all those two together.

Kalas and Innocent have most things in common being twins. They both have a bright brownish hair color. I didn't mention this in their story, but their father was American and their mother was British. Resulting them in having heterochromia. Meaning one eye is a different color then the other. Kalas has a green left eye while his right eye is blue Innocent is the same, except reversed. Kalas has hair going below his eyes and spiky at the tips while messy most of the time. (It's his natural look) Innocent has long red hair, straighter and going passed her hips and having a single strand of hair going between her eyes. Both have slim builds while Kalas is three inches taller with Innocent at 5"3'


After that, you can list their likes and dislikes and have them interact with characters to show them off. It's your creation, so do as you wish.


Now let us go to Fan Characters.

I'll be bringing in two of my fan characters, Link and Lyn's unnamed son and Ike and Zelda's daughter. Taken directly from my fiction SSB Heroes. As mentioned in last writing guide, is the story where the Smashers get powers. This is also going to be a bit confusing as the two are from alternate timelines.

Link went into the future with his power of Space-Time manipulation and accidently took part in a program where some twisted mind was trying to create a powerful army by breeding specific Smashers. Link accidently takes his future selfs place and gets drugged. He is then bred with Future Lyn where nine months later, Lyn gives birth to Link's child. Now the child only inherits his father's ability, but not his mother's Poison Emmision and Enchanced Synethesia. So, the Smashers in the original timeline fixes the future and that future is now void. Fading into the Rifts of Time. However, Link's child is part of his timeline and is saved from fading away, instead he floats until he matures and is able to time-travel himself, only filled with hatred and revenge for his father.

In an alternate timeline, Ike and Zelda gets married and has a child they named Elena after Ike's mother. With Ike's Multiple Personality and Zelda's Precognitive Dreaming, they abilities fused and became Accelerated Learning in which Elena has inherited. This allows her to learn stuff ten times as fast as a normal being can. This also enables her to learn other abilities. She is only mentioned as a mere infant who is walking now and almost talking clearly, although only one year old. The future is fixed and this timeline fades away, however the Unnamed Warrior (Link's Son) arrives and saves Elena from fading away. Here, the Unnamed Warrior has raised her and she learns his ability at some point. She is also filled with hatred and revenge, but more understanding then HIM.


Now that we have their story, now let's focus on their appearance and personality. Unlike OC's these are more limited. Mainly because they have to be modeled after the parents. What would you do if Link's child had blue hair, where Link has blonde and Lyn has green hair? What if Elena was a reckless child with no respect, while Ike has respect for certain people and knows how to move and Zelda is wise and knows what to do? These has to be forged from the pieces of the parents, while adding your own charm as well.

The Unnamed Warrior looks almost like his father, but his hair is a bit longer and straighter while having green tips. He wears the same clothing and his fencing skills are almost like Link's and Lyn's combined, while his archery is nearly flawless, almost always getting his target. He based his clothing off of his father's except wearing a cape on his hip instead of the dress-like tunic. He also has pointy ears and blue eyes. He's lighter and has a smaller build then his fathers, making him more agile. Based off Lyn.

Elena looks almost like both parents combined. She has blue shoulder-length hair and a few strands in front of her face. Her eyes are also blue and has pointy ears. She has an average build, more like her mothers, and has great magical potential while able to wield a sword with ease as well. Using her ability, she learned most magic spells easily and has a fighting style based off of Ike's while adding a couple of movements from Zelda's as well as her own special touches. She learned how to combine her magic to her weapons and enchances it as well as adding special properties.


And that's pretty much it. The children are not yet introduced into SSB Heroes yet, so use this as a sneak peek of their potential. Kalas and Innocent are used in my School Rumble fiction; Twin's Desire and maybe my upcoming School Rumble fic; Never-Ending Fantasy. Feel free to read them and message me for any tips.

Trivia

Kalas in Japanese means "Ill-Omened Raven" or "Forgotten Language" while Angelus means "Angel" in Latin.


School Rumble: Twin's Desire. www.fanfiction.net/s/7080974/1…
SSB Heroes. www.fanfiction.net/s/6480948/1…
My Fanfic Account. www.fanfiction.net/u/2062825/O…
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